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Friday, November 30, 2018

Describe our class

Hello bloggers,

Yesterday our classroom was describing three places in the in room 9 and I wrote about the ceiling, chromebook cupboard and the teachers desk. Our goals are use different sentence starter and interesting vocabulary. This is my writing. 



The chromebook cupboard is filled with chromebooks and chargers laying in the cupboard which is
making it messier. The ipads and the ipad chargers are making it more messier. Some extra chargers
are in a box pilled. The whole cupboard is disorganized leaving some things hanging.


The teacher's desk has lots of drawers filled with learning materials. Near the teachers desk there is a
white board covered with magnets. On the teacher’s desk there is water bottle, sunscreen,
students late pass etc. On the teacher’s wall she has her achievements.

The ceiling is filled with dots everywhere but whenever it rains the water never comes inside the class.
The ceiling has smoke alarm which will alert us whenever there is smoke. The air conditioner is nice and
cold but it’s also rusty. The lights are not strong but they still work.             

Please give me feedback.


Friday, November 23, 2018

Diwali comparison

Namaste bloggers,
Today Miss Percy gave us a task to compare diwali and another festival. Me and my friend Vitaraag were working together. We were trying to find important information about diwali and write it in my own words, use information from a range of sources (including my own), include relevant pictures to add interest to my DLO. I also had to make sure my  layout is clear and easy to read and my spelling and punctuation are correct.    I think I achieved my sign of success criteria did I?

Wednesday, November 14, 2018

How to turn your teacher into a toad.

Hello bloggers,
Today I am going to share you my writing about how to turn your teacher into a toad. This is my one if you like it please give feedback. Our goal was to use different sentence starters, use specific verbs and  check that my writing if it makes sense.

How to turn your teacher into a toad!


If your teacher is annoying you and you want to get rid of your teacher you can change her or he into a toad.


Your ingredients:
  1. 1 toad.
  2. One Spoon.
  3. A blade.
  4. Dead human body cut in half.
  5. A baby
  6. A cauldron


Method:
  1. Shop the toad in quarters and put it in the cauldron.
  2. Mix it for 30 seconds.
  3. Next put the baby in.
  4. Blend it for 30 seconds again.
  5. Apply the body in the cauldron.
  6. Stir it for 20 seconds.

Now your potion is ready! Sneak into your classroom early morning and put the potion in your
teacher’s water bottle because when she drinks it she will be a toad forever.  


Did I achieve my goals?