Yesterday our classroom was describing three places in the in room 9 and I wrote about the ceiling, chromebook cupboard and the teachers desk. Our goals are use different sentence starter and interesting vocabulary. This is my writing.
The chromebook cupboard is filled with chromebooks and chargers laying in the cupboard which is
making it messier. The ipads and the ipad chargers are making it more messier. Some extra chargers
are in a box pilled. The whole cupboard is disorganized leaving some things hanging.
making it messier. The ipads and the ipad chargers are making it more messier. Some extra chargers
are in a box pilled. The whole cupboard is disorganized leaving some things hanging.
The teacher's desk has lots of drawers filled with learning materials. Near the teachers desk there is a
white board covered with magnets. On the teacher’s desk there is water bottle, sunscreen,
students late pass etc. On the teacher’s wall she has her achievements.
white board covered with magnets. On the teacher’s desk there is water bottle, sunscreen,
students late pass etc. On the teacher’s wall she has her achievements.
The ceiling is filled with dots everywhere but whenever it rains the water never comes inside the class.
The ceiling has smoke alarm which will alert us whenever there is smoke. The air conditioner is nice and
cold but it’s also rusty. The lights are not strong but they still work.
The ceiling has smoke alarm which will alert us whenever there is smoke. The air conditioner is nice and
cold but it’s also rusty. The lights are not strong but they still work.
Please give me feedback.
