For writing we were doing where Wild Things are in that Miss Percy showed us several Wild Things and we have to chose one by Maurice sendak. We were trying to achieve some goals these are the goals Use descriptive nouns and verbs (interesting vocabulary). Vary my sentence beginnings. Read my work out loud and check that it makes sense.
This is my writing And a picture.
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| Where the wild things are -Written and illustrated by Maurice Sendak |
The wild things have vibrant, yellow terrible eyes that are staring at Max - the emperor of the wild things. His claws are razor sharp. He has a tail which is fluffy and black. A nose that's triangular shaped. He is swinging on the forest branches.
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Namaste Harshit,
ReplyDeleteI LOVE your first sentence in your description. You have tried very hard to achieve the writing goals. I wonder if next time you could describe your wild thing's personality in detail, not just his appearance.
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